a Song Contest and my Entry - Check it out?!

drjam · Number of posts: 96 Age: 39 Registration date: 2007-06-08

http://www.riffworld.com/Members/DRJaM/peace/

If you have a moment click on this link and
listen to my song entry for the Riffrumble XI by Sonomaworks. The song is based "obviously" on the topic of peace; in my soul, in the world, etc. Feel free to give me a hard time or show some love! Shocked

--> Leave me a "shout"
with a name just a simple thumbs type comment or something. It can be a made up name if you don't want to leave your
real one.

http://www.riffworld.com/Members/DRJaM/peace/

Thanks and God Bless,
David

PeAcE
===========
- Bass Intro

- #Verse 1
Defiantly we pursue
...PeAcE
Things that will benefit me or you
...PeAcE

- #PreChorus/Chorus
Unity is battle worth fighting!
Let it go and open up your mind
Transcend your understanding
You've been broken down
Aiyeee yi yeahh yeahh!

- #Verse 2
Will there be PeAcE?
Let it go and open up your mind
In my soul...
why wont you let it go?
Do you really know!
Let it go and open up your mind

- - #PreChorus/Chorus
Unity is battle worth fighting!
Let it go and open up your mind
Transcend your understanding
You've been broken down
Aiyeee yi yeahh yeahh!

- #Bridge
Give me PeAcE within my soul
This FIRE is out of control
Give me PeAcE with my soul
This FIRE is out of control

- Bass Guitar Solo

- #Verse 3
Blessed are the peacemakers - everyone
whooo, ooh, ohh
Blessed are the peacemakers - everyone
whooo, ooh, ohh

- #Bass Guitar Extro

Everyone?

guitarhoops · Number of posts: 553 Age: 38 Registration date: 2007-01-03

Very cool. I like it. It is different but well done.

L8T · Number of posts: 4219 Registration date: 2007-03-13

Quote:

Very cool. I like it. It is different but well done.

Agreed.

Thanks for the link David.

Keep up the great work.

**alldatndensum** · Mission Of One Number of posts: 9992 Age: 40 Registration date: 2007-01-03

Very well done, but not my cup o' tea.

_________________

"I have no desire to speak w/other tongues, I already do enough damage w/the one I have!!" - Candlemass

bigbravesfan

i liked it.

VALEDICTION · Number of posts: 950 Registration date: 2007-04-13

I liked it, too.